BSP Guide and Kernel Manual updates
cover BSP Guide and Kernel Manual updates
From: Tom Zanussi <[email protected]>
These patches update the BSP Guide and Kernel Manual to reflect 1.0 usage and fix some other minor things.
Please review and pull.
Pull URL: git://git.pokylinux.org/poky-contrib.git
Branch: tzanussi/bsp-and-kernel-manual-fixes
Browse: http://git.pokylinux.org/cgit.cgi/poky-contrib/log/?h=tzanussi/bsp-and-kernel-manual-fixes
Thanks,
Tom Zanussi <[email protected]>
---
Tom Zanussi (2):
documentation: BSP Developer's Guide fixes
documentation: Kernel Manual fixes
documentation/bsp-guide/bsp.xml | 22 +++--- documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml | 120 +++++++++++++------------ 2 files changed, 72 insertions(+), 70 deletions(-)
PATCH 1/2 documentation: BSP Developer's Guide fixes
From: Tom Zanussi <[email protected]>
- use linux-yocto instead of linux-yocto-stable in examples
- change branch names to match linux-yocto usage
- remove outdated 'wrs' where it appears
--- documentation/bsp-guide/bsp.xml | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
documentation/bsp-guide/bsp.xml +11 -11
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ meta-<bsp_name>/conf/layer.conf meta-<bsp_name>/conf/machine/*.conf meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-bsp/* meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-graphics/* -meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable.bbappend +meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> </para>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd/fix_open_max_prepr meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd/macro_tweak.patch meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd/nodolt.patch meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd_1.7.99.2.bb -meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-wrs_git.bbappend +meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> </para>
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd_1.7.99.2.bb <section id='bsp-filelayout-kernel'> <title>Linux Kernel Configuration</title> <programlisting> -meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable.bbappend +meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> <para>
@@ -330,27 +330,27 @@ meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable.bbappend directory. </para> <para> - Suppose you use a BSP that uses the <filename>linux-yocto-stable_git.bb</filename> kernel, + Suppose you use a BSP that uses the <filename>linux-yocto_git.bb</filename> kernel, which is the preferred kernel to use for developing a new BSP using the Yocto Project. In other words, you have selected the kernel in your <filename><bsp_name>.conf</filename> file by adding the following statement: <programlisting> -PREFERRED_PROVIDER_virtual/kernel ?= "linux-yocto-stable" +PREFERRED_PROVIDER_virtual/kernel ?= "linux-yocto" </programlisting> - You would use the <filename>linux-yocto-stable_git.bbappend</filename> file to append + You would use the <filename>linux-yocto_git.bbappend</filename> file to append specific BSP settings to the kernel, thus configuring the kernel for your particular BSP. </para> <para> Now take a look at the existing "crownbay" BSP. The append file used is: <programlisting> -meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable_git.bbappend +meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> The file contains the following: <programlisting> FILESEXTRAPATHS := "${THISDIR}/${PN}" COMPATIBLE_MACHINE_crownbay = "crownbay" -KMACHINE_crownbay = "crownbay" +KMACHINE_crownbay = "yocto/standard/crownbay" </programlisting> This append file adds "crownbay" as a compatible machine, and additionally sets a Yocto Kernel-specific variable that identifies the name of the
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ KMACHINE_crownbay = "crownbay" For example, suppose you had a set of configuration options in a file called <filename>defconfig</filename>. If you put that file inside a directory named - <filename class='directory'>/linux-yocto-stable</filename> and then added + <filename class='directory'>/linux-yocto</filename> and then added a SRC_URI statement such as the following to the append file, those configuration options will be picked up and applied when the kernel is built. <programlisting>
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ SRC_URI += "file://defconfig \ <note><para> Other methods exist to accomplish grouping and defining configuration options. For example, you could directly add configuration options to the Yocto kernel - <filename class='directory'>wrs_meta</filename> branch for your BSP. + <filename class='directory'>meta</filename> branch for your BSP. The configuration options will likely end up in that location anyway if the BSP gets added to the Yocto Project. For information on how to add these configurations directly, see the
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ SRC_URI += "file://defconfig \ </para> <para> In general, however, the Yocto Project maintainers take care of moving the SRC_URI-specified - configuration options to the <filename class='directory'>wrs_meta</filename> branch. + configuration options to the <filename class='directory'>meta</filename> branch. Not only is it easier for BSP developers to not have to worry about putting those configurations in the branch, but having the maintainers do it allows them to apply 'global' knowledge about the kinds of common configuration options multiple BSPs in
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Re: [PATCH 1/2] documentation: BSP Developer's Guide fixes
Quoted 7 lines · Tom Zanussi
From: Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>
- use linux-yocto instead of linux-yocto-stable in examples
- change branch names to match linux-yocto usage
- remove outdated 'wrs' where it appearsSigned-off-by Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>
Quoted 95 lines
--- documentation/bsp-guide/bsp.xml | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)documentation/bsp-guide/bsp.xml +11
-11@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ meta-<bsp_name>/conf/layer.conf meta-<bsp_name>/conf/machine/*.conf meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-bsp/* meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-graphics/* -meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable.bbappend +meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> </para>@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd/fix_open_max_prepr meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd/macro_tweak.patch meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd/nodolt.patch meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd_1.7.99.2.bb -meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-wrs_git.bbappend +meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> </para>@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ meta-crownbay/recipes-graphics/xorg-xserver/xserver-xf86-emgd_1.7.99.2.bb <section id='bsp-filelayout-kernel'> <title>Linux Kernel Configuration</title> <programlisting> -meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable.bbappend +meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> <para>@@ -330,27 +330,27 @@ meta-<bsp_name>/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable.bbappend directory. </para> <para> - Suppose you use a BSP that uses the<filename>linux-yocto-stable_git.bb</filename> kernel, + Suppose you use a BSP that uses the<filename>linux-yocto_git.bb</filename> kernel, which is the preferred kernel to use for developing a new BSP using the Yocto Project. In other words, you have selected the kernel in your <filename><bsp_name>.conf</filename> file by adding the following statement: <programlisting> -PREFERRED_PROVIDER_virtual/kernel ?= "linux-yocto-stable" +PREFERRED_PROVIDER_virtual/kernel ?= "linux-yocto" </programlisting> - You would use the<filename>linux-yocto-stable_git.bbappend</filename> file to append + You would use the<filename>linux-yocto_git.bbappend</filename> file to append specific BSP settings to the kernel, thus configuring the kernel for your particular BSP. </para> <para> Now take a look at the existing "crownbay" BSP. The append file used is: <programlisting> -meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto-stable_git.bbappend +meta-crownbay/recipes-kernel/linux/linux-yocto_git.bbappend </programlisting> The file contains the following: <programlisting> FILESEXTRAPATHS := "${THISDIR}/${PN}" COMPATIBLE_MACHINE_crownbay = "crownbay" -KMACHINE_crownbay = "crownbay" +KMACHINE_crownbay = "yocto/standard/crownbay" </programlisting> This append file adds "crownbay" as a compatible machine, and additionally sets a Yocto Kernel-specific variable that identifies the name of the@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ KMACHINE_crownbay = "crownbay" For example, suppose you had a set of configuration options in a file called <filename>defconfig</filename>. If you put that file inside a directory named -<filename class='directory'>/linux-yocto-stable</filename> and then added +<filename class='directory'>/linux-yocto</filename> and then added a SRC_URI statement such as the following to the append file, those configuration options will be picked up and applied when the kernel is built. <programlisting>@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ SRC_URI += "file://defconfig \ <note><para> Other methods exist to accomplish grouping and defining configuration options. For example, you could directly add configuration options to the Yocto kernel -<filename class='directory'>wrs_meta</filename> branch for your BSP. +<filename class='directory'>meta</filename> branch for your BSP. The configuration options will likely end up in that location anyway if the BSP gets added to the Yocto Project. For information on how to add these configurations directly, see the@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ SRC_URI += "file://defconfig \ </para> <para> In general, however, the Yocto Project maintainers take care of moving the SRC_URI-specified - configuration options to the<filename class='directory'>wrs_meta</filename> branch. + configuration options to the<filename class='directory'>meta</filename> branch. Not only is it easier for BSP developers to not have to worry about putting those configurations in the branch, but having the maintainers do it allows them to apply 'global' knowledge about the kinds of common configuration options multiple BSPs in
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PATCH 2/2 documentation: Kernel Manual fixes
In reply to Tom ZanussiFrom: Tom Zanussi <[email protected]>
Upgraded to reflect 1.0 usage rather than 0.90 usage, and some other clarifications and minor changes.
--- documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml | 120 +++++++++++++------------ 1 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)
documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +61 -59
@@ -425,18 +425,18 @@ repository. <literallayout class='monospaced'> # full description of the changes - > git whatchanged <kernel type>..<bsp>-<kernel type> - > eg: git whatchanged standard..common_pc-standard + > git whatchanged <kernel type>..<kernel type>/<bsp> + > eg: git whatchanged yocto/standard/base..yocto/standard/common-pc/base # summary of the changes - > git log --pretty=oneline --abbrev-commit <kernel type>..<bsp>-<kernel type> + > git log --pretty=oneline --abbrev-commit <kernel type>..<kernel type>/<bsp> # source code changes (one combined diff) - > git diff <kernel type>..<bsp>-<kernel type> - > git show <kernel type>..<bsp>-<kernel type> + > git diff <kernel type>..<kernel type>/<bsp> + > git show <kernel type>..<kernel type>/<bsp> # dump individual patches per commit - > git format-patch -o <dir> <kernel type>..<bsp>-<kernel type> + > git format-patch -o <dir> <kernel type>..<kernel type>/<bsp> # determine the change history of a particular file > git whatchanged <path to file>
@@ -467,9 +467,9 @@ repository. # determine which branches contain a feature > git branch --contains <tag> - # show the changes in a kernel type - (0.9 examples) - > git whatchanged wrs_base..<kernel type> - > eg: git whatchanged wrs_base..standard + # show the changes in a kernel type + > git whatchanged yocto/base..<kernel type> + > eg: git whatchanged yocto/base..yocto/standard/base </literallayout> <para>
@@ -733,10 +733,10 @@ repository. <para> For example, the following command pushes the changes from your local branch - <filename>common_pc-standard</filename> to the remote branch with the same name - in the master repository <filename>//git.mycompany.com/pub/git/kernel-2.6.27</filename>. + <filename>yocto/standard/common-pc/base</filename> to the remote branch with the same name + in the master repository <filename>//git.mycompany.com/pub/git/kernel-2.6.37</filename>. <literallayout class='monospaced'> - > push ssh://git.mycompany.com/pub/git/kernel-2.6.27 common_pc-standard:common_pc-standard + > push ssh://git.mycompany.com/pub/git/kernel-2.6.37 yocto/standard/common-pc/base:yocto/standard/common-pc/base </literallayout> </para>
@@ -866,9 +866,9 @@ repository. <para> The following commands illustrate some of the steps you could use to - import the common_pc-standard kernel into a secondary SCM: + import the yocto/standard/common-pc/base kernel into a secondary SCM: <literallayout class='monospaced'> - > git checkout common_pc-standard + > git checkout yocto/standard/common-pc/base > cd .. ; echo linux/.git > .cvsignore > cvs import -m "initial import" linux MY_COMPANY start </literallayout>
@@ -881,8 +881,8 @@ repository. <para> The following commands illustrate how you can condense and merge two BSPs into a second SCM: <literallayout class='monospaced'> - > git checkout common_pc-standard - > git merge common_pc_64-standard + > git checkout yocto/standard/common-pc/base + > git merge yocto/standard/common-pc-64/base # resolve any conflicts and commit them > cd .. ; echo linux/.git > .cvsignore > cvs import -m "initial import" linux MY_COMPANY start
@@ -1006,9 +1006,12 @@ That's it. Configure and build. <title>Creating a BSP Based on an Existing Similar BSP</title> <para> - This section provides an example for creating a BSP that is based on an existing, and hopefully, - similar one. - Follow these steps and keep in mind your particular situation and differences: + This section provides an example for creating a BSP + that is based on an existing, and hopefully, similar + one. It assumes you'll be using a local kernel + repository and will be pointing the kernel recipe at + that. Follow these steps and keep in mind your + particular situation and differences: <orderedlist> <listitem><para>
@@ -1016,16 +1019,10 @@ That's it. Configure and build. </para> <para> - You can start with something in <filename>meta/conf/machine</filename>. - Or, <filename>meta-emenlow/conf/machine</filename> has an example in its own layer. + You can start with something in <filename>meta/conf/machine</filename> - <filename>meta/conf/machine/atom-pc.conf</filename> for example. Or, you can start with a machine configuration from any of the BSP layers in the meta-intel repository at <ulink url='http://git.pokylinux.org/cgit/cgit.cgi/meta-intel/'></ulink>, such as <filename>meta-intel/meta-emenlow/conf/machine/emenlow.conf</filename>. </para> <para> - The most up-to-date machines that are probably most similar to yours and that you might want - to look at are <filename>meta/conf/machine/atom-pc.conf</filename> and - <filename>meta-emenlow/conf/machine/emenlow.conf</filename>. - Both of these files were either just added or upgraded to use the Yocto Project kernel - at <ulink url='http://git.pokylinux.org/cgit/cgit.cgi/linux-2.6-windriver/'></ulink>. The main difference between the two is that "emenlow" is in its own layer. It is in its own layer because it needs extra machine-specific packages such as its own video driver and other supporting packages.
@@ -1049,19 +1046,21 @@ That's it. Configure and build. <para> As an example consider this: <itemizedlist> - <listitem><para>Copy meta-emenlow</para></listitem> + <listitem><para>Copy meta-emenlow to meta-mymachine</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Fix or remove anything you do not need. For this example the only thing left was the kernel directory with a - <filename>linux-yocto-stable_git.bbappend</filename> file - (linux-yocto-stable is the kernel listed in - <filename>meta-crownbay/conf/machine/crownbay.conf</filename></para></listitem>. + <filename>linux-yocto_git.bbappend</filename> + file + and <filename>meta-mymachine/conf/machine/mymachine.conf</filename> + (linux-yocto is the kernel listed in + <filename>meta-emenlow/conf/machine/emenlow.conf</filename>)</para></listitem>. <listitem><para>Add a new entry in the <filename>build/conf/bblayers.conf</filename> so the new layer can be found by Bitbake.</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - Get an image with a working kernel built. + Create a machine branch for your machine. </para> <para>
@@ -1070,58 +1069,52 @@ That's it. Configure and build. To create this branch first create a bare clone of the Yocto Project git repository. Next, create a local clone of that: <literallayout class='monospaced'> - $ git clone --bare git://git.pokylinux.org/linux-2.6-windriver.git - linux-2.6-windriver.git - $ git clone linux-2.6-windriver.git linux-2.6-windriver + $ git clone --bare git://git.pokylinux.org/linux-yocto-2.6.37.git + linux-yocto-2.6.37.git + $ git clone linux-yocto-2.6.37.git linux-yocto-2.6.37 </literallayout> </para> <para> Now create a branch in the local clone and push it to the bare clone: <literallayout class='monospaced'> - $ git checkout -b crownbay-standard origin/standard - $ git push origin crownbay-standard:crownbay-standard + $ git checkout -b yocto/standard/mymachine origin/yocto/standard/base + $ git push origin yocto/standard/mymachine:yocto/standard/mymachine </literallayout> - </para> - - <para> - At this point, your git tree should compile. </para></listitem> - + <listitem><para> - In a layer, create a <filename>linux-yocto-stable_git.bbappend</filename> + In a layer, create a <filename>linux-yocto_git.bbappend</filename> file with the following: </para> <para> <literallayout class='monospaced'> - COMPATIBLE_MACHINE = ${MACHINE} + FILESEXTRAPATHS := "${THISDIR}/${PN}" + COMPATIBLE_MACHINE_mymachine = "mymachine" # It is often nice to have a local clone of the kernel repository, to # allow patches to be staged, branches created, and so forth. Modify # KSRC to point to your local clone as appropriate. - # KSRC ?= /path/to/your/bare/clone/yocto-kernel + KSRC ?= /path/to/your/bare/clone/for/example/linux-yocto-2.6.37.git - # KMACHINE is the branch to be built, or alternateively + # KMACHINE is the branch to be built, or alternatively # KBRANCH can be directly set. + # KBRANCH is set to KMACHINE in the main linux-yocto_git.bb + # KBRANCH ?= "${LINUX_KERNEL_TYPE}/${KMACHINE}" - # KBRANCH ?= "${KMACHINE}-${LINUX_KERNEL_TYPE}" + KMACHINE_mymachine = "yocto/standard/mymachine" - # SRC_URI = "git://${KSRC};nocheckout=1;branch=${KBRANCH},meta;name=machine,meta" + SRC_URI = "git://${KSRC};nocheckout=1;branch=${KBRANCH},meta;name=machine,meta" </literallayout> </para> <para> - In the previous sample file you need to update and remove the comment from - the KSRC assignment and also remove the comment from the SRC_URI line. - </para> - - <para> After doing that, select the machine in <filename>build/conf/local.conf</filename>: <literallayout class='monospaced'> # - MACHINE ?= "crownbay" + MACHINE ?= "mymachine" # </literallayout> </para>
@@ -1131,6 +1124,10 @@ That's it. Configure and build. <literallayout class='monospaced'> $ bitbake poky-image-sato-live </literallayout> + </para></listitem> + + <listitem><para> + Modify the kernel configuration for your machine. </para> <para>
@@ -1149,17 +1146,22 @@ That's it. Configure and build. And, another <filename>.cfg</filename> file would contain: <literallayout class='monospaced'> CONFIG_LOG_BUF_SHIFT=18 + </literallayout> - http://git.pokylinux.org/cgit/cgit.cgi/linux-2.6-windriver/ + <para> + These config fragments could then be picked up and + applied to the kernel .config by appending them to the kernel SRC_URI: + </para> - SRC_URI_append_crownbay = " file://some.cfg \ + <literallayout class='monospaced'> + SRC_URI_append_mymachine = " file://some.cfg \ file://other.cfg \ " </literallayout> </para> <para> - You could also add these directly to the git repository <filename>wrs_meta</filename> + You could also add these directly to the git repository <filename>meta</filename> branch as well. However, the former method is a simple starting point. </para></listitem>
@@ -1173,7 +1175,7 @@ That's it. Configure and build. <para> Practically speaking, to generate the patches, you'd go to the source in the build tree: <literallayout class='monospaced'> - build/tmp/work/crownbay-poky-linux/linux-yocto-2.6.34+git0+d1cd5c80ee97e81e130be8c3de3965b770f320d6_0+ + build/tmp/work/mymachine-poky-linux/linux-yocto-2.6.37+git0+d1cd5c80ee97e81e130be8c3de3965b770f320d6_0+ 0431115c9d720fee5bb105f6a7411efb4f851d26-r13/linux </literallayout> </para>
@@ -1182,7 +1184,7 @@ That's it. Configure and build. Then, modify the code there, using quilt to save the changes, and recompile until it works: <literallayout class='monospaced'> - $ bitbake -c compile -f linux-yocto-stable + $ bitbake -c compile -f linux-yocto </literallayout> </para></listitem>
@@ -1191,7 +1193,7 @@ That's it. Configure and build. SRC_URI location. The patch is applied the next time you do a clean build. Of course, since you have a branch for the BSP in git, it would be better to put it there instead. - For example, in this case, commit the patch to the "crownbay-standard" branch, and during the + For example, in this case, commit the patch to the "yocto/standard/mymachine" branch, and during the next build it is applied from there. </para></listitem> </orderedlist>
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Re: [PATCH 2/2] documentation: Kernel Manual fixes
Quoted 2 lines · Tom Zanussi
From: Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>
Thanks Tom, you beat me to it.
Quoted 2 lines
Upgraded to reflect 1.0 usage rather than 0.90 usage, and some other clarifications and minor changes.
Only one minor nitpic below:
Quoted 12 lines
Signed-off-by Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>--- documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml | 120 +++++++++++++------------ 1 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +0
-0@@ -425,18 +425,18 @@ repository.
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documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml That's it. Configure and build. · line 1011
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<para>documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +3
-3- This section provides an example for creating a BSP that is based on an existing, and hopefully, - similar one. - Follow these steps and keep in mind your particular situation and differences: + This section provides an example for creating a BSP + that is based on an existing, and hopefully, similar + one. It assumes you'll be using a local kernel
We should void using contractions in formal documentation
s/you'll/you will/
documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml That's it. Configure and build. · line 1022
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documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +4
-2+ repository and will be pointing the kernel recipe at + that. Follow these steps and keep in mind your + particular situation and differences: <orderedlist> <listitem><para>@@ -1016,16 +1019,10 @@ That's it. Configure and build. </para> <para> - You can start with something in<filename>meta/conf/machine</filename>. - Or,<filename>meta-emenlow/conf/machine</filename> has an example in its own layer. + You can start with something in<filename>meta/conf/machine</filename> -<filename>meta/conf/machine/atom-pc.conf</filename> for example. Or, you can start with a machine configuration from any of the BSP layers in the meta-intel repository at<ulink url='http://git.pokylinux.org/cgit/cgit.cgi/meta-intel/'></ulink>, such as<filename>meta-intel/meta-emenlow/conf/machine/emenlow.conf</filename>.
I presume we're using some line length limit in our documentation?
Otherwise looks good to me.
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Re: [PATCH 2/2] documentation: Kernel Manual fixes
True on the contractions... not good to use those.
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Subject: Re: [poky] [PATCH 2/2] documentation: Kernel Manual fixes
Quoted 2 lines · Tom Zanussi
From: Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>
Thanks Tom, you beat me to it.
Quoted 2 lines
Upgraded to reflect 1.0 usage rather than 0.90 usage, and some other clarifications and minor changes.
Only one minor nitpic below:
Quoted 12 lines
Signed-off-by Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>--- documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml | 120 +++++++++++++------------ 1 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +0
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<para>documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +3
-3- This section provides an example for creating a BSP that is based on an existing, and hopefully, - similar one. - Follow these steps and keep in mind your particular situation and differences: + This section provides an example for creating a BSP + that is based on an existing, and hopefully, similar + one. It assumes you'll be using a local kernel
We should void using contractions in formal documentation
s/you'll/you will/
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documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml +4
-2+ repository and will be pointing the kernel recipe at + that. Follow these steps and keep in mind your + particular situation and differences: <orderedlist> <listitem><para>@@ -1016,16 +1019,10 @@ That's it. Configure and build. </para> <para> - You can start with something in<filename>meta/conf/machine</filename>. - Or,<filename>meta-emenlow/conf/machine</filename> has an example in its own layer. + You can start with something in<filename>meta/conf/machine</filename> -<filename>meta/conf/machine/atom-pc.conf</filename> for example. Or, you can start with a machine configuration from any of the BSP layers in the meta-intel repository at<ulink url='http://git.pokylinux.org/cgit/cgit.cgi/meta-intel/'></ulink>, such as<filename>meta-intel/meta-emenlow/conf/machine/emenlow.conf</filename>.
I presume we're using some line length limit in our documentation?
Otherwise looks good to me.
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Darren Hart Intel Open Source Technology Center Yocto Project - Linux Kernel _______________________________________________ poky mailing list [email protected] https://lists.yoctoproject.org/listinfo/poky
Re: [PATCH 2/2] documentation: Kernel Manual fixes
Quoted 15 lines · Scott M
True on the contractions... not good to use those.
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Subject: Re: [poky] [PATCH 2/2] documentation: Kernel Manual fixesQuoted 2 lines · Tom Zanussi
From: Tom Zanussi<[email protected]>
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Thanks Tom, you beat me to it.
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Upgraded to reflect 1.0 usage rather than 0.90 usage, and some other clarifications and minor changes.
Only one minor nitpic below:
I've merged the two documentation patches, taking Darren's feedback into account, thanks.
Cheers,
Richard