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PATCH RESEND 1/1 Fix the messy code file Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist

From: Harry Wei <[email protected]>

This patch can fix the messy code file Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist.

---
 Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist |  118 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)
Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist +59 -59
index 951415b..7f41713 100644
@@ -8,102 +8,102 @@ or if there is a problem with the translation.
 
 Chinese maintainer: Harry Wei <[email protected]>
 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
-Documentation/SubmitChecklist ?????ķ???
+Documentation/SubmitChecklist 的中文翻译
 
-?????????ۻ????±??ĵ????ݣ???ֱ??��ϵԭ?ĵ???ά???ߡ???????ʹ??Ӣ??
-??????��?ѵĻ???Ҳ?????????İ?ά?????????????�����?????²???ʱ???߷?
-?????????⣬??��ϵ???İ?ά???ߡ?
+如果想评论或更新本文的内容,请直接联系原文档的维护者。如果你使用英文
+交流有困难的话,也可以向中文版维护者求助。如果本翻译更新不及时或者翻
+译存在问题,请联系中文版维护者。
 
-???İ?ά???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-???İ淭???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-???İ?У???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版维护者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版翻译者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版校译者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
 
 
-????Ϊ????
+以下为正文
 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
-Linux?ں??ύ?嵥
+Linux内核提交清单
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-??????һЩ?ں˿?????Ӧ?????Ļ??????飬?????????뿴???Լ????ں˲????ύ
-?????ܵĸ??졣
+这里有一些内核开发者应该做的基本事情,如果他们想看到自己的内核补丁提交
+被接受的更快。
 
-??Щ???dz???Documentation/SubmittingPatches?ĵ??????ṩ???Լ?????
-?????ύLinux?ں˲?????˵????
+这些都是超出Documentation/SubmittingPatches文档里所提供的以及其他
+关于提交Linux内核补丁的说明。
 
-1????????ʹ????һ????????ô??#include????/?????Ǹ????ܵ??Ǹ??ļ???
-   ??Ҫ?��????????????붨??/?????Ǹ????ܵ?ͷ?ļ???
+1:如果你使用了一个功能那么就#include定义/声明那个功能的那个文件。
+   不要依靠其他间接引入定义/声明那个功能的头文件。
 
-2?????????????û??߸???CONFIGѡ?? =y??=m??????=n??
-   ??Ҫ?б??뾯??/?????? ??Ҫ??��?Ӿ???/??????
+2:构建简洁适用或者更改CONFIG选项 =y,=m,或者=n.   
+   不要有编译警告/错误, 不要有链接警告/错误.
 
-2b??ͨ?? allnoconfig, allmodconfig
+2b:通过 allnoconfig, allmodconfig
 
-2c????ʹ?? 0=builddir ?ɹ??ع???
+2c:当使用 0=builddir 成功地构建
 
-3??ͨ??ʹ?ñ??ؽ??????빤?߻???????һЩ???????????ڶ?CPU?????Ϲ?????
+3:通过使用本地交叉编译工具或者其他一些构建产所,在多CPU框架上构建。
 
-4??ppc64 ??һ???ܺõļ??齻???????Ŀ??ܣ???Ϊ???????ѡ?unsigned long??
-   ??64λֵ��ʹ?á?
+4:ppc64 是一个很好的检查交叉编译的框架,因为它往往把‘unsigned long’
+   当64位值来使用。
 
-5??????Documentation/CodingStyle?ļ???????ϸ???����????㲹??????????????
-   ʹ?ò?????????????????Υ??(scripts/checkpatch.pl)??????Ա?????ύ??
-   ??Ӧ?õ??????????㲹???е?????Υ?档
+5:按照Documentation/CodingStyle文件里的详细描述,检查你补丁的整体风格。
+   使用补丁风格检查琐碎的违规(scripts/checkpatch.pl),审核员优先提交。
+   你应该调整遗留在你补丁中的所有违规。
 
-6???κθ??»??߸Ķ?CONFIGѡ????ܴ??????ò˵???
+6:任何更新或者改动CONFIG选项都不能打乱配置菜单。
 
-7?????е?Kconfigѡ?????¶?Ҫ??˵?????֡?
+7:所有的Kconfig选项更新都要有说明文字。
 
-8???Ѿ????????ܽ??????ص?Kconfig???ϡ????Ǻ???ͨ?????????õ?--??��???????½???
+8:已经认真地总结了相关的Kconfig组合。这是很难通过测试做好的--脑力在这里下降。
 
-9?????????м????ԡ?
+9:检查具有简洁性。
 
-10??ʹ??'make checkstack'??'make namespacecheck'???飬Ȼ???޸????ҵ??????⡣
-    ע?⣺??ջ???鲻????ȷ?س??????⣬?????κε?һ???????ڶ?ջ??ʹ?ö???512?ֽ?
-    ??Ҫ׼???޸ġ?
+10:使用'make checkstack'和'make namespacecheck'检查,然后修改所找到的问题。
+    注意:堆栈检查不会明确地出现问题,但是任何的一个函数在堆栈上使用多于512字节
+    都要准备修改。
 
-11??????kernel-doc??ȫ???ں?APIs?ļ???????Ҫ????̬?ĺ????????ǰ???Ҳ????ν????
-    ʹ??'make htmldocs'????'make mandocs'��????kernel-doc??Ȼ???޸??κ?
-    ???ֵ????⡣
+11:包含kernel-doc到全局内核APIs文件。(不要求静态的函数,但是包含也无所谓。)
+    使用'make htmldocs'或者'make mandocs'来检查kernel-doc,然后修改任何
+    发现的问题。
 
-12???Ѿ?ͨ??CONFIG_PREEMPT, CONFIG_DEBUG_PREEMPT,
+12:已经通过CONFIG_PREEMPT, CONFIG_DEBUG_PREEMPT,
     CONFIG_DEBUG_SLAB, CONFIG_DEBUG_PAGEALLOC, CONFIG_DEBUG_MUTEXES,
-    CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK, CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK_SLEEP???ԣ?????ͬʱ??
-    ʹ?ܡ?
+    CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK, CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK_SLEEP测试,并且同时都
+    使能。
 
-13???Ѿ???????????ʹ?û??߲?ʹ?? CONFIG_SMP ?? CONFIG_PREEMPT????ִ??ʱ?䡣
+13:已经都构建并且使用或者不使用 CONFIG_SMP 和 CONFIG_PREEMPT测试执行时间。
 
-14?????�����Ӱ??IO/Disk???ȵȣ??Ѿ?ͨ??ʹ?û??߲?ʹ?? CONFIG_LBDAF ???ԡ?
+14:如果补丁影响IO/Disk,等等:已经通过使用或者不使用 CONFIG_LBDAF 测试。
 
-15?????е?codepaths?Ѿ???ʹ????lockdep???ù??ܡ?
+15:所有的codepaths已经行使所有lockdep启用功能。
 
-16?????е?/proc??¼???¶?Ҫ?????ļ?????Documentation/Ŀ¼?¡?
+16:所有的/proc记录更新都要作成文件放在Documentation/目录下。
 
-17?????е??ں??����??????¶?????¼??Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt?ļ??С?
+17:所有的内核启动参数更新都被记录到Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt文件中。
 
-18?????е?ģ?????????¶???MODULE_PARM_DESC()??¼??
+18:所有的模块参数更新都用MODULE_PARM_DESC()记录。
 
-19?????е??û??ռ??ӿڸ??¶?????¼??Documentation/ABI/???鿴Documentation/ABI/README
-    ???Ի??ø???????Ϣ???ı??û??ռ??ӿڵIJ???Ӧ?ñ??ʼ????͸[email protected]??
+19:所有的用户空间接口更新都被记录到Documentation/ABI/。查看Documentation/ABI/README
+    可以获得更多的信息。改变用户空间接口的补丁应该被邮件抄送给[email protected]。
 
-20?????????Dz??Ƕ?ͨ??`make headers_check'??
+20:检查它是不是都通过`make headers_check'。
 
-21???Ѿ?ͨ??????????slab??page-allocationʧ?ܼ??顣?鿴Documentation/fault-injection/??
+21:已经通过至少引入slab和page-allocation失败检查。查看Documentation/fault-injection/。
 
-22???¼?????Դ???Ѿ?ͨ??`gcc -W'??ʹ??"make EXTRA_CFLAGS=-W"?????롣???????????ܶෳ?գ?
-    ???Ƕ???Ѱ??©???????洦??????:"warning: comparison between signed and unsigned"??
+22:新加入的源码已经通过`gcc -W'(使用"make EXTRA_CFLAGS=-W")编译。这样将产生很多烦恼,
+    但是对于寻找漏洞很有益处,例如:"warning: comparison between signed and unsigned"。
 
-23?????????ϲ???-mm?????????ٲ??ԣ???��ȷ?????Ƿ񻹺Ͳ????????е????�����һ???????Լ???VM??VFS
-    ????????ϵͳ?и????仯??
+23:当它被合并到-mm补丁集后再测试,用来确定它是否还和补丁队列中的其他补丁一起工作以及在VM,VFS
+    和其他子系统中各个变化。
 
-24?????е??ڴ?????{e.g., barrier(), rmb(), wmb()}??Ҫ??Դ?????е?һ??ע??��???????Ƕ??Ǹ?ʲô??
-    ?Լ?ԭ????
+24:所有的内存屏障{e.g., barrier(), rmb(), wmb()}需要在源代码中的一个注释来解释他们都是干什么的
+    以及原因。
 
-25?????????κ????????????ƵIJ????????ӣ?ҲҪ????Documentation/ioctl/ioctl-number.txt??
+25:如果有任何输入输出控制的补丁被添加,也要更新Documentation/ioctl/ioctl-number.txt。
 
-26?????????ĸ??Ĵ????��?????ʹ???κε??ں?APIs????????????kconfig?????й?ϵ?Ĺ??ܣ?????Ҫ
-    ʹ?????ص?kconfig???Źرգ? and/or =m??????ѡ???ṩ??[??ͬһʱ?䲻?????õĶ????ã?????????????????
-    ????????]??
+26:如果你的更改代码依靠或者使用任何的内核APIs或者与下面的kconfig符号有关系的功能,你就要
+    使用相关的kconfig符号关闭, and/or =m(如果选项提供)[在同一时间不是所用的都启用,仅仅各个或者自由
+    组合他们]:
 
     CONFIG_SMP, CONFIG_SYSFS, CONFIG_PROC_FS, CONFIG_INPUT, CONFIG_PCI,
     CONFIG_BLOCK, CONFIG_PM, CONFIG_HOTPLUG, CONFIG_MAGIC_SYSRQ,
-    CONFIG_NET, CONFIG_INET=n (??һ??ʹ?? CONFIG_NET=y)
+    CONFIG_NET, CONFIG_INET=n (后一个使用 CONFIG_NET=y)
Signature · 1 line
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#1 lore raw

From: Harry Wei <[email protected]>

So sorry with a mistake, which i did not check my patch with ./checkpatch.pl. This one is all well for checkpatch.pl. It can fix the messy code file Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist correctly.

---
 Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist |  118 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)
Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist +59 -59
index 951415b..7f41713 100644
@@ -8,102 +8,102 @@ or if there is a problem with the translation.
 
 Chinese maintainer: Harry Wei <[email protected]>
 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
-Documentation/SubmitChecklist ?????ķ???
+Documentation/SubmitChecklist 的中文翻译
 
-?????????ۻ????±??ĵ????ݣ???ֱ??��ϵԭ?ĵ???ά???ߡ???????ʹ??Ӣ??
-??????��?ѵĻ???Ҳ?????????İ?ά?????????????�����?????²???ʱ???߷?
-?????????⣬??��ϵ???İ?ά???ߡ?
+如果想评论或更新本文的内容,请直接联系原文档的维护者。如果你使用英文
+交流有困难的话,也可以向中文版维护者求助。如果本翻译更新不及时或者翻
+译存在问题,请联系中文版维护者。
 
-???İ?ά???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-???İ淭???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-???İ?У???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版维护者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版翻译者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版校译者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
 
 
-????Ϊ????
+以下为正文
 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
-Linux?ں??ύ?嵥
+Linux内核提交清单
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-??????һЩ?ں˿?????Ӧ?????Ļ??????飬?????????뿴???Լ????ں˲????ύ
-?????ܵĸ??졣
+这里有一些内核开发者应该做的基本事情,如果他们想看到自己的内核补丁提交
+被接受的更快。
 
-??Щ???dz???Documentation/SubmittingPatches?ĵ??????ṩ???Լ?????
-?????ύLinux?ں˲?????˵????
+这些都是超出Documentation/SubmittingPatches文档里所提供的以及其他
+关于提交Linux内核补丁的说明。
 
-1????????ʹ????һ????????ô??#include????/?????Ǹ????ܵ??Ǹ??ļ???
-   ??Ҫ?��????????????붨??/?????Ǹ????ܵ?ͷ?ļ???
+1:如果你使用了一个功能那么就#include定义/声明那个功能的那个文件。
+   不要依靠其他间接引入定义/声明那个功能的头文件。
 
-2?????????????û??߸???CONFIGѡ?? =y??=m??????=n??
-   ??Ҫ?б??뾯??/?????? ??Ҫ??��?Ӿ???/??????
+2:构建简洁适用或者更改CONFIG选项 =y,=m,或者=n.
+   不要有编译警告/错误, 不要有链接警告/错误.
 
-2b??ͨ?? allnoconfig, allmodconfig
+2b:通过 allnoconfig, allmodconfig
 
-2c????ʹ?? 0=builddir ?ɹ??ع???
+2c:当使用 0=builddir 成功地构建
 
-3??ͨ??ʹ?ñ??ؽ??????빤?߻???????һЩ???????????ڶ?CPU?????Ϲ?????
+3:通过使用本地交叉编译工具或者其他一些构建产所,在多CPU框架上构建。
 
-4??ppc64 ??һ???ܺõļ??齻???????Ŀ??ܣ???Ϊ???????ѡ?unsigned long??
-   ??64λֵ��ʹ?á?
+4:ppc64 是一个很好的检查交叉编译的框架,因为它往往把‘unsigned long’
+   当64位值来使用。
 
-5??????Documentation/CodingStyle?ļ???????ϸ???����????㲹??????????????
-   ʹ?ò?????????????????Υ??(scripts/checkpatch.pl)??????Ա?????ύ??
-   ??Ӧ?õ??????????㲹???е?????Υ?档
+5:按照Documentation/CodingStyle文件里的详细描述,检查你补丁的整体风格。
+   使用补丁风格检查琐碎的违规(scripts/checkpatch.pl),审核员优先提交。
+   你应该调整遗留在你补丁中的所有违规。
 
-6???κθ??»??߸Ķ?CONFIGѡ????ܴ??????ò˵???
+6:任何更新或者改动CONFIG选项都不能打乱配置菜单。
 
-7?????е?Kconfigѡ?????¶?Ҫ??˵?????֡?
+7:所有的Kconfig选项更新都要有说明文字。
 
-8???Ѿ????????ܽ??????ص?Kconfig???ϡ????Ǻ???ͨ?????????õ?--??��???????½???
+8:已经认真地总结了相关的Kconfig组合。这是很难通过测试做好的--脑力在这里下降。
 
-9?????????м????ԡ?
+9:检查具有简洁性。
 
-10??ʹ??'make checkstack'??'make namespacecheck'???飬Ȼ???޸????ҵ??????⡣
-    ע?⣺??ջ???鲻????ȷ?س??????⣬?????κε?һ???????ڶ?ջ??ʹ?ö???512?ֽ?
-    ??Ҫ׼???޸ġ?
+10:使用'make checkstack'和'make namespacecheck'检查,然后修改所找到的问题。
+    注意:堆栈检查不会明确地出现问题,但是任何的一个函数在堆栈上使用多于512字节
+    都要准备修改。
 
-11??????kernel-doc??ȫ???ں?APIs?ļ???????Ҫ????̬?ĺ????????ǰ???Ҳ????ν????
-    ʹ??'make htmldocs'????'make mandocs'��????kernel-doc??Ȼ???޸??κ?
-    ???ֵ????⡣
+11:包含kernel-doc到全局内核APIs文件。(不要求静态的函数,但是包含也无所谓。)
+    使用'make htmldocs'或者'make mandocs'来检查kernel-doc,然后修改任何
+    发现的问题。
 
-12???Ѿ?ͨ??CONFIG_PREEMPT, CONFIG_DEBUG_PREEMPT,
+12:已经通过CONFIG_PREEMPT, CONFIG_DEBUG_PREEMPT,
     CONFIG_DEBUG_SLAB, CONFIG_DEBUG_PAGEALLOC, CONFIG_DEBUG_MUTEXES,
-    CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK, CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK_SLEEP???ԣ?????ͬʱ??
-    ʹ?ܡ?
+    CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK, CONFIG_DEBUG_SPINLOCK_SLEEP测试,并且同时都
+    使能。
 
-13???Ѿ???????????ʹ?û??߲?ʹ?? CONFIG_SMP ?? CONFIG_PREEMPT????ִ??ʱ?䡣
+13:已经都构建并且使用或者不使用 CONFIG_SMP 和 CONFIG_PREEMPT测试执行时间。
 
-14?????�����Ӱ??IO/Disk???ȵȣ??Ѿ?ͨ??ʹ?û??߲?ʹ?? CONFIG_LBDAF ???ԡ?
+14:如果补丁影响IO/Disk,等等:已经通过使用或者不使用 CONFIG_LBDAF 测试。
 
-15?????е?codepaths?Ѿ???ʹ????lockdep???ù??ܡ?
+15:所有的codepaths已经行使所有lockdep启用功能。
 
-16?????е?/proc??¼???¶?Ҫ?????ļ?????Documentation/Ŀ¼?¡?
+16:所有的/proc记录更新都要作成文件放在Documentation/目录下。
 
-17?????е??ں??����??????¶?????¼??Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt?ļ??С?
+17:所有的内核启动参数更新都被记录到Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt文件中。
 
-18?????е?ģ?????????¶???MODULE_PARM_DESC()??¼??
+18:所有的模块参数更新都用MODULE_PARM_DESC()记录。
 
-19?????е??û??ռ??ӿڸ??¶?????¼??Documentation/ABI/???鿴Documentation/ABI/README
-    ???Ի??ø???????Ϣ???ı??û??ռ??ӿڵIJ???Ӧ?ñ??ʼ????͸[email protected]??
+19:所有的用户空间接口更新都被记录到Documentation/ABI/。查看Documentation/ABI/README
+    可以获得更多的信息。改变用户空间接口的补丁应该被邮件抄送给[email protected]。
 
-20?????????Dz??Ƕ?ͨ??`make headers_check'??
+20:检查它是不是都通过`make headers_check'。
 
-21???Ѿ?ͨ??????????slab??page-allocationʧ?ܼ??顣?鿴Documentation/fault-injection/??
+21:已经通过至少引入slab和page-allocation失败检查。查看Documentation/fault-injection/。
 
-22???¼?????Դ???Ѿ?ͨ??`gcc -W'??ʹ??"make EXTRA_CFLAGS=-W"?????롣???????????ܶෳ?գ?
-    ???Ƕ???Ѱ??©???????洦??????:"warning: comparison between signed and unsigned"??
+22:新加入的源码已经通过`gcc -W'(使用"make EXTRA_CFLAGS=-W")编译。这样将产生很多烦恼,
+    但是对于寻找漏洞很有益处,例如:"warning: comparison between signed and unsigned"。
 
-23?????????ϲ???-mm?????????ٲ??ԣ???��ȷ?????Ƿ񻹺Ͳ????????е????�����һ???????Լ???VM??VFS
-    ????????ϵͳ?и????仯??
+23:当它被合并到-mm补丁集后再测试,用来确定它是否还和补丁队列中的其他补丁一起工作以及在VM,VFS
+    和其他子系统中各个变化。
 
-24?????е??ڴ?????{e.g., barrier(), rmb(), wmb()}??Ҫ??Դ?????е?һ??ע??��???????Ƕ??Ǹ?ʲô??
-    ?Լ?ԭ????
+24:所有的内存屏障{e.g., barrier(), rmb(), wmb()}需要在源代码中的一个注释来解释他们都是干什么的
+    以及原因。
 
-25?????????κ????????????ƵIJ????????ӣ?ҲҪ????Documentation/ioctl/ioctl-number.txt??
+25:如果有任何输入输出控制的补丁被添加,也要更新Documentation/ioctl/ioctl-number.txt。
 
-26?????????ĸ??Ĵ????��?????ʹ???κε??ں?APIs????????????kconfig?????й?ϵ?Ĺ??ܣ?????Ҫ
-    ʹ?????ص?kconfig???Źرգ? and/or =m??????ѡ???ṩ??[??ͬһʱ?䲻?????õĶ????ã?????????????????
-    ????????]??
+26:如果你的更改代码依靠或者使用任何的内核APIs或者与下面的kconfig符号有关系的功能,你就要
+    使用相关的kconfig符号关闭, and/or =m(如果选项提供)[在同一时间不是所用的都启用,仅仅各个或者自由
+    组合他们]:
 
     CONFIG_SMP, CONFIG_SYSFS, CONFIG_PROC_FS, CONFIG_INPUT, CONFIG_PCI,
     CONFIG_BLOCK, CONFIG_PM, CONFIG_HOTPLUG, CONFIG_MAGIC_SYSRQ,
-    CONFIG_NET, CONFIG_INET=n (??һ??ʹ?? CONFIG_NET=y)
+    CONFIG_NET, CONFIG_INET=n (后一个使用 CONFIG_NET=y)
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#2 lore raw
Quoted 6 lines · Harry Wei

From: Harry Wei <[email protected]>

So sorry with a mistake, which i did not check my patch with ./checkpatch.pl. This one is all well for checkpatch.pl. It can fix the messy code file Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist correctly.

I'm not fond of kernel documentation translation.. but after a quick look, I don't think the quality of this translation is satisfying..

I'm not going to review the whole doc, just a few comments below.

Quoted 19 lines
---
 Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist |  118 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)
Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist +1 -4
index 951415b..7f41713 100644
@@ -8,102 +8,102 @@ or if there is a problem with the translation.
 
 Chinese maintainer: Harry Wei <[email protected]>
 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
-Documentation/SubmitChecklist ?????ķ???
+Documentation/SubmitChecklist 的中文翻译
 
-?????????ۻ????±??ĵ????ݣ???ֱ??�ϵԭ?ĵ???ά???ߡ???????ʹ??Ӣ??
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Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist or if there is a problem with the translation. · line 19

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+如果想评论或更新本文的内容,请直接联系原文档的维护者。如果你使用英文
+交流有困难的话,也可以向中文版维护者求助。如果本翻译更新不及时或者翻
+译存在问题,请联系中文版维护者。
 
-???İ?ά???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-???İ淭???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-???İ?У???ߣ? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版维护者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版翻译者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+中文版校译者: 贾威威 Harry Wei <[email protected]>

I don't think you can be the reviewer as well as the translator.

Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist or if there is a problem with the translation. · line 28

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-????Ϊ????
+以下为正文
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-Linux?ں??ύ?嵥
+Linux内核提交清单
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-??????һЩ?ں˿?????Ӧ?????Ļ??????飬?????????뿴???Լ????ں˲????ύ
-?????ܵĸ??졣
+这里有一些内核开发者应该做的基本事情,如果他们想看到自己的内核补丁提交
+被接受的更快。

You're a bit rigid in translation. I believe this should be better:

如果他们想看到自己提交的内核补丁被接受的更快。

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Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist or if there is a problem with the translation. · line 77

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-15?????е?codepaths?Ѿ???ʹ????lockdep???ù??ܡ?
+15:所有的codepaths已经行使所有lockdep启用功能。

I suspect you don't really understand the original sentence, because the translated text isn't understandable at all.

"在打开lockdep功能的情况下,所有的代码路径都被运行过。"

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Quoted 6 lines · Harry Wei

From: Harry Wei <[email protected]>

So sorry with a mistake, which i did not check my patch with ./checkpatch.pl. This one is all well for checkpatch.pl. It can fix the messy code file Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist correctly.

I'm not fond of kernel documentation translation.. but after a quick look, I don't think the quality of this translation is satisfying..

This translation is a little worse, but we can proofread it again and again til well. You can not expect anything to be perfect in the first time.

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I'm not going to review the whole doc, just a few comments below.

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 Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist |  118 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 59 deletions(-)
Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist +4 -4
index 951415b..7f41713 100644
@@ -8,102 +8,102 @@ or if there is a problem with the translation.
 
 Chinese maintainer: Harry Wei <[email protected]>
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-Documentation/SubmitChecklist ??????????
+Documentation/SubmitChecklist ???????????????
 
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-?????????????????????????????????
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+??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
+????????????????????????????????????????????????
 
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Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist or if there is a problem with the translation. · line 19

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-?????????????? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-?????????????? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
-?????????????? ?????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+????????????????????? ????????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+????????????????????? ????????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>
+????????????????????? ????????? Harry Wei <[email protected]>

I don't think you can be the reviewer as well as the translator.

I will try my best.

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-??????????
+???????????????
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-Linux????????????
+Linux??????????????????
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
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Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist or if there is a problem with the translation. · line 26

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-??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
-??????????????
+?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
+?????????????????????

You're a bit rigid in translation. I believe this should be better:

True, i will change my translation to yours.

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Documentation/zh_CN/SubmitChecklist or if there is a problem with the translation. · line 27

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-15????????codepaths????????????lockdep??????????
+15????????????codepaths??????????????????lockdep???????????????

I suspect you don't really understand the original sentence, because the translated text isn't understandable at all.

Okay, i will proofread it with others who are all kernel lovers by [email protected]. The translation of this document is only translated and proofread by me so there are some improper portions. Now i prepare to proofread it again til okay.
Thanks for your correction, i will try my best to translate documentations correctly.

Comments?

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"?????????lockdep????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????"

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