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PATCH] virtio-spec: small English/punctuation corrections

PATCH Luiz Capitulino 2 participants 2 messages May 31, 2013 – Jun 3, 2013 KVM

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1. s/These are devices are/These devices are
2. s/Thefirst/The first
3. s/, Guest should/. Guest should

---
 virtio-spec.lyx | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
virtio-spec.lyx +3 -3
index 6e188d0..7e4ce71 100644
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ description "Peripheral Component Interconnect; a common device bus.  See\\\\htt
 \end_inset
 
  devices.
- These are devices are found in 
+ These devices are found in 
 \emph on
 virtual
 \emph default
@@ -1558,7 +1558,7 @@ name "sub:Feature-Bits"
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout Standard
-Thefirst configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
+The first configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
  The bits are allocated as follows:
 \end_layout
 
@@ -2919,7 +2919,7 @@ For each ring, guest should then disable interrupts by writing VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_
 INTERRUPT flag in avail structure, if required.
  It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts by clearing
  the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the EVENT_IDX field in
- the available structure, Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
+ the available structure. Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
  then recheck the ring empty condition.
  This is necessary to handle the case where, after the last check and before
  enabling interrupts, an interrupt has been suppressed by the device:
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Quoted 8 lines · Luiz Capitulino

1. s/These are devices are/These devices are
2. s/Thefirst/The first
3. s/, Guest should/. Guest should

---
 virtio-spec.lyx | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

Thanks... I changed ", Guest" to ". The guest", and re-entered the changes by hand to get change tracking.

Thanks,
Rusty.

Quoted 34 lines
virtio-spec.lyx +3 -3
index 6e188d0..7e4ce71 100644
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ description "Peripheral Component Interconnect; a common device bus.  See\\\\htt
 \end_inset
 
  devices.
- These are devices are found in 
+ These devices are found in 
 \emph on
 virtual
 \emph default
@@ -1558,7 +1558,7 @@ name "sub:Feature-Bits"
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout Standard
-Thefirst configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
+The first configuration field indicates the features that the device supports.
  The bits are allocated as follows:
 \end_layout
 
@@ -2919,7 +2919,7 @@ For each ring, guest should then disable interrupts by writing VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_
 INTERRUPT flag in avail structure, if required.
  It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts by clearing
  the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the EVENT_IDX field in
- the available structure, Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
+ the available structure. Guest should then execute a memory barrier, and
  then recheck the ring empty condition.
  This is necessary to handle the case where, after the last check and before
  enabling interrupts, an interrupt has been suppressed by the device:
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