editorial: update S390 Common I/O link
PATCH v2 1/1 editorial: update S390 Common I/O link
Paul Knight wrote:
In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this initial public review publication:
- broken link in Normative references:
-- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204,
http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any future revisions
(This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft, but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
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changes from v1:
do not tweak description just the url
introduction.tex | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
introduction.tex +2 -1
@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References} IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122, July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\ \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\ - \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\ + \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\ \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} & Conventional PCI Specifications, \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},
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Quoted 19 lines · Michael S. Tsirkin
Paul Knight wrote:
In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this initial public review publication:
- broken link in Normative references:
-- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204,
http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any future revisions
(This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft, but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.Reported-by Paul Knight <[email protected]>Suggested-by Halil Pasic <[email protected]>Signed-off-by Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
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changes from v1:
do not tweak description just the urlintroduction.tex | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
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Quoted 16 lines · On Tue, 10 May 2022 10:01:56 -0400 "Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> wrote:
Paul Knight wrote:
In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this initial public review publication:
- broken link in Normative references:
-- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204,
http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any future revisions
(This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft, but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
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Reported-by Paul Knight <[email protected]>Suggested-by Halil Pasic <[email protected]>Signed-off-by Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
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changes from v1:
do not tweak description just the urlintroduction.tex | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)introduction.tex +2
-1@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References} IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122, July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\ \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\ - \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\ + \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\ \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} & Conventional PCI Specifications, \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},