man/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2, UFFDIO_MOVE.2const: Add UFFDIO_MOVE page
PATCH 1/1 man/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2, UFFDIO_MOVE.2const: Add UFFDIO_MOVE page
Documentation was extracted from the original patch written by Andrea Arcangeli and upstreamed in [1]. Minor edits were made to maintain the same documentation style as other userfaultfd ioctl commands.
[1] <https://lore.kernel.org/all/[email protected]/>
--- man/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 | 2 + man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const | 149 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 2 files changed, 151 insertions(+) create mode 100644 man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const
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@@ -69,6 +69,8 @@ events. .TQ .BR UFFDIO_COPY (2const) .TQ +.BR UFFDIO_MOVE (2const) +.TQ .BR UFFDIO_ZEROPAGE (2const) .TQ .BR UFFDIO_WAKE (2const)
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maintainerHi Suren,
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Documentation was extracted from the original patch written by Andrea Arcangeli and upstreamed in [1]. Minor edits were made to maintain the same documentation style as other userfaultfd ioctl commands.
[1] <https://lore.kernel.org/all/[email protected]/>
Signed-off-by Suren Baghdasaryan <[email protected]>
It looks good, but there are a few issues commented below. Thanks for the patch!
Have a lovely day!
Alex
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--- man/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 | 2 + man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const | 149 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 2 files changed, 151 insertions(+) create mode 100644 man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2constman/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 +2
-0@@ -69,6 +69,8 @@ events. .TQ .BR UFFDIO_COPY (2const) .TQ +.BR UFFDIO_MOVE (2const) +.TQ .BR UFFDIO_ZEROPAGE (2const) .TQ .BR UFFDIO_WAKE (2const)man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const new file +0
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This shouldn't be there. There should be a diagnostic from the build system about it being spurious: that line is there only in pages that use tables (.TS/.TE), to let man(1) know that it should invoke tbl(1).
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-0+.\" Written by Andrea Arcangeli <[email protected]> +.\" +.\" SPDX-License-Identifier: Linux-man-pages-copyleft +.\" +.TH UFFDIO_MOVE 2const (date) "Linux man-pages (unreleased)" +.SH NAME +UFFDIO_MOVE +\- +atomically move a continuous memory chunk into the userfault registered range +.SH LIBRARY +Standard C library +.RI ( libc ,\~ \-lc ) +.SH SYNOPSIS +.nf +.BR "#include <linux/userfaultfd.h>" " /* Definition of " UFFD* " constants */" +.B #include <sys/ioctl.h> +.P
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-0+.BI "int ioctl(int " fd ", UFFDIO_MOVE, struct uffdio_move *" argp ); +.P +.B #include <linux/userfaultfd.h> +.P +.fi +.EX +.B struct uffdio_move { +.BR " __u64 dst;" " /* Destination of move */" +.BR " __u64 src;" " /* Source of move */" +.BR " __u64 len;" " /* Number of bytes to move */"
Are we in time to name this size instead of len? Length usually refers to the number of non-zero characters in a string, while size refers to number of bytes in some object, which is more appropriate in these cases.
If this has already been released in the kernel, don't worry about it, but if it hasn't, maybe we should call it size?
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-0+.BR " __u64 mode;" " /* Flags controlling behavior of move */" +.BR " __s64 move;" " /* Number of bytes moved, or negated error */" +.B }; +.EE +.SH DESCRIPTION +Atomically move a continuous memory chunk into the userfault registered +range and optionally wake up the blocked thread.
Please use semantic newlines. In this case, I'd break the line before 'into', and before 'and'.
$ MANWIDTH=72 man man-pages | sed -n '/Use semantic newlines/,/^$/p'
Use semantic newlines
In the source of a manual page, new sentences should be started
on new lines, long sentences should be split into lines at
clause breaks (commas, semicolons, colons, and so on), and long
clauses should be split at phrase boundaries. This convention,
sometimes known as "semantic newlines", makes it easier to see
the effect of patches, which often operate at the level of indi‐
vidual sentences, clauses, or phrases.man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 38
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-0+.P +The following value may be bitwise ORed in +.I mode
Please use .mode instead of mode. That makes it more obvious that we're talking about a struct member. I know most pages don't do this, but I'm planning a global change for consistency soon; since this page is new, we can start clean and do it as
.I .mode
This is done in a few cases already in fanotify(7), for example.
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-0+to change the behavior of the +.B UFFDIO_MOVE +operation: +.TP +.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_DONTWAKE +Do not wake up the thread that waits for page-fault resolution +.TP
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-0+.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_ALLOW_SRC_HOLES +Allow holes in the source virtual range that is being moved. +When not specified, the holes will result in +.B ENOENT +error. +When specified, the holes will be accounted as successfully +moved memory. This is mostly useful to move hugepage aligned +virtual regions without knowing if there are transparent +hugepages in the regions or not, but preventing the risk of +having to split the hugepage during the operation.
Please use semantic newlines. In this case, I'd break:
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-0+.P +The +.I move +field is used by the kernel to return the number of bytes +that was actually moved, or an error (a negated
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-0+.IR errno -style +value). The
Always break after '.'
See also: <https://web.archive.org/web/20171217060354/http://www.heracliteanriver.com/?p=324>
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-0+.I move +field is output-only; +it is not read by the +.B UFFDIO_MOVE +operation.
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-0+.P +The operation may fail for various reasons. Usually, remapping of +pages that are not exclusive to the given process fail; once KSM +might deduplicate pages or fork() COW-shares pages during fork() +with child processes, they are no longer exclusive. Further, the +kernel might only perform lightweight checks for detecting whether +the pages are exclusive, and return -EBUSY in case that check fails. +To make the operation more likely to succeed, KSM should be +disabled, fork() should be avoided or MADV_DONTFORK should be +configured for the source VMA before fork().
Please use semantic newlines.
Also, a few things like EBUSY and MADV_DONTFORK should be marked up.
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-0+.SH RETURN VALUE +On success, +0 is returned. +In this case, the entire area was moved. +.P +On error, \-1 is returned and +.I errno +is set to indicate the error. +.SH ERRORS +.TP +.B EAGAIN +The number of bytes moved (i.e., the value returned in the +.I move +field) +does not equal the value that was specified in the +.I len +field. +.TP +.B EINVAL +Either +.I dst +or +.I len +was not a multiple of the system page size, or the range specified by +.I src +and +.I len +or +.I dst +and +.I len +was invalid. +.TP +.B EINVAL +An invalid bit was specified in the +.I mode +field. +.TP +.BR ENOENT +The source virtual memory range has unmapped holes and +.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_ALLOW_SRC_HOLES +is not set. +.TP +.BR EEXIST +The destination virtual memory range is fully or partially
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-0+mapped. +.TP +.BR EBUSY +The pages in the source virtual memory range are either +pinned or not exclusive to the process. The kernel might +only perform lightweight checks for detecting whether the +pages are exclusive. To make the operation more likely to +succeed, KSM should be disabled, fork() should be avoided +or MADV_DONTFORK should be configured for the source virtual +memory area before fork().
Semantic newlines.
This paragraph is repeating part of the information from the last paragraph in the DESCRIPTION. Do we want to de-duplicate somehow?
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-0+.TP +.BR ENOMEM +Allocating memory needed for the operation failed. +.TP +.BR ESRCH +The target process has exited at the time of a UFFDIO_MOVE
UFFDIO_MOVE should be bold.
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-0+operation. +.SH STANDARDS +Linux. +.SH HISTORY +Linux 6.8. +.SH SEE ALSO +.BR ioctl (2), +.BR ioctl_userfaultfd (2), +.BR userfaultfd (2) +.P +.I linux.git/\:Documentation/\:admin\-guide/\:mm/\:userfaultfd.rstbase-commit:
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Hi Suren,
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Documentation was extracted from the original patch written by Andrea Arcangeli and upstreamed in [1]. Minor edits were made to maintain the same documentation style as other userfaultfd ioctl commands.
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[1] <https://lore.kernel.org/all/[email protected]/>
Signed-off-by Suren Baghdasaryan <[email protected]>It looks good, but there are a few issues commented below. Thanks for the patch!
Thanks for the feedback. Working on addressing your comments and will post v2 today.
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Have a lovely day!
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--- man/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 | 2 + man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const | 149 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 2 files changed, 151 insertions(+) create mode 100644 man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2constman/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 +2
-0@@ -69,6 +69,8 @@ events. .TQ .BR UFFDIO_COPY (2const) .TQ +.BR UFFDIO_MOVE (2const) +.TQ .BR UFFDIO_ZEROPAGE (2const) .TQ .BR UFFDIO_WAKE (2const)man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const new file +0
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-0+.\" Written by Andrea Arcangeli <[email protected]> +.\" +.\" SPDX-License-Identifier: Linux-man-pages-copyleft +.\" +.TH UFFDIO_MOVE 2const (date) "Linux man-pages (unreleased)" +.SH NAME +UFFDIO_MOVE +\- +atomically move a continuous memory chunk into the userfault registered range +.SH LIBRARY +Standard C library +.RI ( libc ,\~ \-lc ) +.SH SYNOPSIS +.nf +.BR "#include <linux/userfaultfd.h>" " /* Definition of " UFFD* " constants */" +.B #include <sys/ioctl.h> +.Pman/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 28
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-0+.BI "int ioctl(int " fd ", UFFDIO_MOVE, struct uffdio_move *" argp ); +.P +.B #include <linux/userfaultfd.h> +.P +.fi +.EX +.B struct uffdio_move { +.BR " __u64 dst;" " /* Destination of move */" +.BR " __u64 src;" " /* Source of move */" +.BR " __u64 len;" " /* Number of bytes to move */"Are we in time to name this size instead of len? Length usually refers to the number of non-zero characters in a string, while size refers to number of bytes in some object, which is more appropriate in these cases.
If this has already been released in the kernel, don't worry about it, but if it hasn't, maybe we should call it size?
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-0+.BR " __u64 mode;" " /* Flags controlling behavior of move */" +.BR " __s64 move;" " /* Number of bytes moved, or negated error */" +.B }; +.EE +.SH DESCRIPTION +Atomically move a continuous memory chunk into the userfault registered +range and optionally wake up the blocked thread.Please use semantic newlines. In this case, I'd break the line before 'into', and before 'and'.
$ MANWIDTH=72 man man-pages | sed -n '/Use semantic newlines/,/^$/p' Use semantic newlines In the source of a manual page, new sentences should be started on new lines, long sentences should be split into lines at clause breaks (commas, semicolons, colons, and so on), and long clauses should be split at phrase boundaries. This convention, sometimes known as "semantic newlines", makes it easier to see the effect of patches, which often operate at the level of indi‐ vidual sentences, clauses, or phrases.man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 38
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-0+.P +The following value may be bitwise ORed in +.I modePlease use .mode instead of mode. That makes it more obvious that we're talking about a struct member. I know most pages don't do this, but I'm planning a global change for consistency soon; since this page is new, we can start clean and do it as
.I .mode
This is done in a few cases already in fanotify(7), for example.
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-0+to change the behavior of the +.B UFFDIO_MOVE +operation: +.TP +.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_DONTWAKE +Do not wake up the thread that waits for page-fault resolution +.TPman/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 55
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-0+.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_ALLOW_SRC_HOLES +Allow holes in the source virtual range that is being moved. +When not specified, the holes will result in +.B ENOENT +error. +When specified, the holes will be accounted as successfully +moved memory. This is mostly useful to move hugepage aligned +virtual regions without knowing if there are transparent +hugepages in the regions or not, but preventing the risk of +having to split the hugepage during the operation.Please use semantic newlines. In this case, I'd break:
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See also: <https://web.archive.org/web/20171217060354/http://www.heracliteanriver.com/?p=324>
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-0+.P +The operation may fail for various reasons. Usually, remapping of +pages that are not exclusive to the given process fail; once KSM +might deduplicate pages or fork() COW-shares pages during fork() +with child processes, they are no longer exclusive. Further, the +kernel might only perform lightweight checks for detecting whether +the pages are exclusive, and return -EBUSY in case that check fails. +To make the operation more likely to succeed, KSM should be +disabled, fork() should be avoided or MADV_DONTFORK should be +configured for the source VMA before fork().Please use semantic newlines.
Also, a few things like EBUSY and
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-0+.SH RETURN VALUE +On success, +0 is returned. +In this case, the entire area was moved. +.P +On error, \-1 is returned and +.I errno +is set to indicate the error. +.SH ERRORS +.TP +.B EAGAIN +The number of bytes moved (i.e., the value returned in the +.I move +field) +does not equal the value that was specified in the +.I len +field. +.TP +.B EINVAL +Either +.I dst +or +.I len +was not a multiple of the system page size, or the range specified by +.I src +and +.I len +or +.I dst +and +.I len +was invalid. +.TP +.B EINVAL +An invalid bit was specified in the +.I mode +field. +.TP +.BR ENOENT +The source virtual memory range has unmapped holes and +.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_ALLOW_SRC_HOLES +is not set. +.TP +.BR EEXIST +The destination virtual memory range is fully or partiallyman/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 132
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-0+mapped. +.TP +.BR EBUSY +The pages in the source virtual memory range are either +pinned or not exclusive to the process. The kernel might +only perform lightweight checks for detecting whether the +pages are exclusive. To make the operation more likely to +succeed, KSM should be disabled, fork() should be avoided +or MADV_DONTFORK should be configured for the source virtual +memory area before fork().Semantic newlines.
This paragraph is repeating part of the information from the last paragraph in the DESCRIPTION. Do we want to de-duplicate somehow?
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-0+.TP +.BR ENOMEM +Allocating memory needed for the operation failed. +.TP +.BR ESRCH +The target process has exited at the time of a UFFDIO_MOVE
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-0+operation. +.SH STANDARDS +Linux. +.SH HISTORY +Linux 6.8. +.SH SEE ALSO +.BR ioctl (2), +.BR ioctl_userfaultfd (2), +.BR userfaultfd (2) +.P +.I linux.git/\:Documentation/\:admin\-guide/\:mm/\:userfaultfd.rstQuoted 4 lines
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Hi Suren,
Quoted 6 lines · Suren Baghdasaryan
Documentation was extracted from the original patch written by Andrea Arcangeli and upstreamed in [1]. Minor edits were made to maintain the same documentation style as other userfaultfd ioctl commands.
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Signed-off-by Suren Baghdasaryan <[email protected]>It looks good, but there are a few issues commented below. Thanks for the patch!
Thanks for the feedback. Working on addressing your comments and will post v2 today.
Answers to your comments are below.
Resulting v2 is posted at
https://lore.kernel.org/all/[email protected]/
Thanks!
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Have a lovely day!
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--- man/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 | 2 + man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const | 149 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 2 files changed, 151 insertions(+) create mode 100644 man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2constman/man2/ioctl_userfaultfd.2 +2
-0@@ -69,6 +69,8 @@ events. .TQ .BR UFFDIO_COPY (2const) .TQ +.BR UFFDIO_MOVE (2const) +.TQ .BR UFFDIO_ZEROPAGE (2const) .TQ .BR UFFDIO_WAKE (2const)man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const new file +0
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-0+.\" Written by Andrea Arcangeli <[email protected]> +.\" +.\" SPDX-License-Identifier: Linux-man-pages-copyleft +.\" +.TH UFFDIO_MOVE 2const (date) "Linux man-pages (unreleased)" +.SH NAME +UFFDIO_MOVE +\- +atomically move a continuous memory chunk into the userfault registered range +.SH LIBRARY +Standard C library +.RI ( libc ,\~ \-lc ) +.SH SYNOPSIS +.nf +.BR "#include <linux/userfaultfd.h>" " /* Definition of " UFFD* " constants */" +.B #include <sys/ioctl.h> +.Pman/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 28
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-0+.BI "int ioctl(int " fd ", UFFDIO_MOVE, struct uffdio_move *" argp ); +.P +.B #include <linux/userfaultfd.h> +.P +.fi +.EX +.B struct uffdio_move { +.BR " __u64 dst;" " /* Destination of move */" +.BR " __u64 src;" " /* Source of move */" +.BR " __u64 len;" " /* Number of bytes to move */"Are we in time to name this size instead of len? Length usually refers to the number of non-zero characters in a string, while size refers to number of bytes in some object, which is more appropriate in these cases.
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If this has already been released in the kernel, don't worry about it, but if it hasn't, maybe we should call it size?
Sorry, it was released back in 6.8.
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-0+.BR " __u64 mode;" " /* Flags controlling behavior of move */" +.BR " __s64 move;" " /* Number of bytes moved, or negated error */" +.B }; +.EE +.SH DESCRIPTION +Atomically move a continuous memory chunk into the userfault registered +range and optionally wake up the blocked thread.Please use semantic newlines. In this case, I'd break the line before 'into', and before 'and'.
Ack.
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$ MANWIDTH=72 man man-pages | sed -n '/Use semantic newlines/,/^$/p' Use semantic newlines In the source of a manual page, new sentences should be started on new lines, long sentences should be split into lines at clause breaks (commas, semicolons, colons, and so on), and long clauses should be split at phrase boundaries. This convention, sometimes known as "semantic newlines", makes it easier to see the effect of patches, which often operate at the level of indi‐ vidual sentences, clauses, or phrases.Quoted 3 lines
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Please use .mode instead of mode. That makes it more obvious that we're talking about a struct member. I know most pages don't do this, but I'm planning a global change for consistency soon; since this page is new, we can start clean and do it as
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This is done in a few cases already in fanotify(7), for example.
Ack. I assume that should be done everywhere else.
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-0+to change the behavior of the +.B UFFDIO_MOVE +operation: +.TP +.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_DONTWAKE +Do not wake up the thread that waits for page-fault resolution +.TPman/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 55
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-0+.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_ALLOW_SRC_HOLES +Allow holes in the source virtual range that is being moved. +When not specified, the holes will result in +.B ENOENT +error. +When specified, the holes will be accounted as successfully +moved memory. This is mostly useful to move hugepage aligned +virtual regions without knowing if there are transparent +hugepages in the regions or not, but preventing the risk of +having to split the hugepage during the operation.Please use semantic newlines. In this case, I'd break:
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-0+.IR errno -style +value). TheAlways break after '.'
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See also: <https://web.archive.org/web/20171217060354/http://www.heracliteanriver.com/?p=324>
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-0+.I move +field is output-only; +it is not read by the +.B UFFDIO_MOVE +operation.man/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 77
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-0+.P +The operation may fail for various reasons. Usually, remapping of +pages that are not exclusive to the given process fail; once KSM +might deduplicate pages or fork() COW-shares pages during fork() +with child processes, they are no longer exclusive. Further, the +kernel might only perform lightweight checks for detecting whether +the pages are exclusive, and return -EBUSY in case that check fails. +To make the operation more likely to succeed, KSM should be +disabled, fork() should be avoided or MADV_DONTFORK should be +configured for the source VMA before fork().Please use semantic newlines.
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Also, a few things like EBUSY and
MADV_DONTFORKshould be marked up.
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-0+.SH RETURN VALUE +On success, +0 is returned. +In this case, the entire area was moved. +.P +On error, \-1 is returned and +.I errno +is set to indicate the error. +.SH ERRORS +.TP +.B EAGAIN +The number of bytes moved (i.e., the value returned in the +.I move +field) +does not equal the value that was specified in the +.I len +field. +.TP +.B EINVAL +Either +.I dst +or +.I len +was not a multiple of the system page size, or the range specified by +.I src +and +.I len +or +.I dst +and +.I len +was invalid. +.TP +.B EINVAL +An invalid bit was specified in the +.I mode +field. +.TP +.BR ENOENT +The source virtual memory range has unmapped holes and +.B UFFDIO_MOVE_MODE_ALLOW_SRC_HOLES +is not set. +.TP +.BR EEXIST +The destination virtual memory range is fully or partiallyman/man2const/UFFDIO_MOVE.2const line 132
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-0+mapped. +.TP +.BR EBUSY +The pages in the source virtual memory range are either +pinned or not exclusive to the process. The kernel might +only perform lightweight checks for detecting whether the +pages are exclusive. To make the operation more likely to +succeed, KSM should be disabled, fork() should be avoided +or MADV_DONTFORK should be configured for the source virtual +memory area before fork().Semantic newlines.
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This paragraph is repeating part of the information from the last paragraph in the DESCRIPTION. Do we want to de-duplicate somehow?
Yes, I folded this into the appropriate error code description.
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-0+.TP +.BR ENOMEM +Allocating memory needed for the operation failed. +.TP +.BR ESRCH +The target process has exited at the time of a UFFDIO_MOVE
UFFDIO_MOVEshould be bold.
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-0+operation. +.SH STANDARDS +Linux. +.SH HISTORY +Linux 6.8. +.SH SEE ALSO +.BR ioctl (2), +.BR ioctl_userfaultfd (2), +.BR userfaultfd (2) +.P +.I linux.git/\:Documentation/\:admin\-guide/\:mm/\:userfaultfd.rstQuoted 4 lines
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maintainerHi Suren,
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+.B struct
uffdio_move{+.BR " __u64 dst;" " /* Destination of move */" +.BR " __u64 src;" " /* Source of move */" +.BR " __u64 len;" " /* Number of bytes to move */"Are we in time to name this size instead of len? Length usually refers to the number of non-zero characters in a string, while size refers to number of bytes in some object, which is more appropriate in these cases.
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If this has already been released in the kernel, don't worry about it, but if it hasn't, maybe we should call it size?
Sorry, it was released back in 6.8.
Okay, no problem.
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+.P
+The following value may be bitwise ORed in
+.I modePlease use .mode instead of mode. That makes it more obvious that we're talking about a struct member. I know most pages don't do this, but I'm planning a global change for consistency soon; since this page is new, we can start clean and do it as
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.I .mode
This is done in a few cases already in fanotify(7), for example.
Ack. I assume that should be done everywhere else.
Yep.
Have a lovely night!
Alex
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