virtio-spec: serial: english tweak
Michael S. Tsirkin
maintainerPATCH 1/1 virtio-spec: serial: english tweak
"A number of virtqueues are created" seems clearer than "the number of virtqueues": it's virtqueues that are created not the number.
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I'm not a native english speaker but the below seems correct to me. Rusty?
virtio-spec.lyx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
virtio-spec.lyx +1 -1
@@ -6406,7 +6406,7 @@ If the VIRTIO_CONSOLE_F_MULTIPORT feature is negotiated, the driver can spawn multiple ports, not all of which may be attached to a console. Some could be generic ports. In this case, the control virtqueues are enabled and according to the max_nr_po -rts configuration-space value, the appropriate number of virtqueues are +rts configuration-space value, an appropriate number of virtqueues are created. A control message indicating the driver is ready is sent to the host. The host can then send control messages for adding new ports to the device.
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Quoted 5 lines · Michael S. Tsirkin
"A number of virtqueues are created" seems clearer than "the number of virtqueues": it's virtqueues that are created not the number.
Signed-off-by Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
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Michael S. Tsirkin
maintainerQuoted 5 lines · Michael S. Tsirkin
"A number of virtqueues are created" seems clearer than "the number of virtqueues": it's virtqueues that are created not the number.
Signed-off-by Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
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I'm not a native english speaker but the below seems correct to me. Rusty?
virtio-spec.lyx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)virtio-spec.lyx +1
-1@@ -6406,7 +6406,7 @@ If the VIRTIO_CONSOLE_F_MULTIPORT feature is negotiated, the driver can spawn multiple ports, not all of which may be attached to a console. Some could be generic ports. In this case, the control virtqueues are enabled and according to the max_nr_po -rts configuration-space value, the appropriate number of virtqueues are +rts configuration-space value, an appropriate number of virtqueues are created. A control message indicating the driver is ready is sent to the host. The host can then send control messages for adding new ports to the device.Signature · 1 line
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"A number of virtqueues are created" seems clearer than "the number of virtqueues": it's virtqueues that are created not the number.
Signed-off-by Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
Two opposite problem exists:
virtio-0.9.5.lyx renamed from virtio-0.9.5.lyx.orig +2 -2
@@ -8685,7 +8685,7 @@ s on QueueNum, QueueAlign and QueuePFN a \begin_inset Newline newline \end_inset - Queue size is a number of elements in the queue, therefore size of the + Queue size is the number of elements in the queue, therefore size of the descriptor table and both available and used rings. \begin_inset Newline newline \end_inset
@@ -8850,7 +8850,7 @@ reference "sub:Device-Initialization-Seq \end_layout \begin_layout Standard -Virtual queue size is a number of elements in the queue, therefore size +Virtual queue size is the number of elements in the queue, therefore size of the descriptor table and both available and used rings. \end_layout
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I'm not a native english speaker but the below seems correct to me. Rusty?
virtio-spec.lyx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)virtio-spec.lyx +0
-0@@ -6406,7 +6406,7 @@ If the VIRTIO_CONSOLE_F_MULTIPORT feature isnegotiated, the driver can
spawn multiple ports, not all of which may be attached to a console.
Some could be generic ports.
In this case, the control virtqueues are enabled and according to themax_nr_po
-rts configuration-space value, the appropriate number of virtqueues are
+rts configuration-space value, an appropriate number of virtqueues are
created.
A control message indicating the driver is ready is sent to the host.
The host can then send control messages for adding new ports to the device.
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Quoted 3 lines · Michael S. Tsirkin
"A number of virtqueues are created" seems clearer than "the number of virtqueues": it's virtqueues that are created not the number.
"the appropriate number" <- there is only one appropriate number. "an appropriate number" <- there is at least one appropriate number.
If it's a specified number, the former is more precise.
Cheers,
Rusty.