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README: add some commas for clarity

PATCH Applied Robert Karszniewicz 2 participants 2 messages Sep 19, 2020 – Sep 21, 2020

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PATCH 1/1 README: add some commas for clarity

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 README | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
README +5 -5
index d8077d21b..0a837b2de 100644
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ in board/sandbox/env:
 
   # ./scripts/bareboxenv -s -p 0x10000 arch/sandbox/board/env env.bin
 
-To get some files to play with you can generate a cramfs image:
+To get some files to play with, you can generate a cramfs image:
   # mkcramfs somedir/ cramfs.bin
 
 The barebox image is a normal Linux executable, so it can be started
@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ given with '-i' will appear as /dev/fd[n].
 
 If barebox finds a valid configuration sector on /dev/env0 it will
 load it to /env. It then executes /env/init if it exists. If you have
-loaded the example environment barebox will show you a menu asking for
+loaded the example environment, barebox will show you a menu asking for
 your settings.
 
-If you have started barebox as root you will find a new tap device on your
+If you have started barebox as root, you will find a new tap device on your
 host which you can configure using ifconfig. Once you configured bareboxs
-network settings accordingly you can do a ping or tftpboot.
+network settings accordingly, you can do a ping or tftpboot.
 
-If you have mapped a cramfs image try mounting it with
+If you have mapped a cramfs image, try mounting it with
 
   # mkdir /cram
   # mount /dev/fd0 cramfs /cram
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README

Quoted 6 lines · Robert Karszniewicz
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 README | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
README +0 -0

Applied, thanks

Sascha

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index d8077d21b..0a837b2de 100644

README +5 -5
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ in board/sandbox/env:
 
   # ./scripts/bareboxenv -s -p 0x10000 arch/sandbox/board/env env.bin
 
-To get some files to play with you can generate a cramfs image:
+To get some files to play with, you can generate a cramfs image:
   # mkcramfs somedir/ cramfs.bin
 
 The barebox image is a normal Linux executable, so it can be started
@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ given with '-i' will appear as /dev/fd[n].
 
 If barebox finds a valid configuration sector on /dev/env0 it will
 load it to /env. It then executes /env/init if it exists. If you have
-loaded the example environment barebox will show you a menu asking for
+loaded the example environment, barebox will show you a menu asking for
 your settings.
 
-If you have started barebox as root you will find a new tap device on your
+If you have started barebox as root, you will find a new tap device on your
 host which you can configure using ifconfig. Once you configured bareboxs
-network settings accordingly you can do a ping or tftpboot.
+network settings accordingly, you can do a ping or tftpboot.
 
-If you have mapped a cramfs image try mounting it with
+If you have mapped a cramfs image, try mounting it with
 
   # mkdir /cram
   # mount /dev/fd0 cramfs /cram
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