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PATCH 1/1 memorder: Fix conjunction use

From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Akira Yokosawa <[email protected]>
Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

Fixes 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative")
Signed-off-by Akira Yokosawa <[email protected]>

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Paul,

This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is "there are at most two threads involved". There should be other word choices. It's up to you which one to use.

Thanks, Akira
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 memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
memorder/memorder.tex +1 -1
index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure.
 Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in
 Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity}
 and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}.
-In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there
+In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there
 are at most two threads involved.
 
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From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001

From: Akira Yokosawa <[email protected]>
Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

Quoted 8 lines
Fixes 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative")
Signed-off-by Akira Yokosawa <[email protected]>

---
Paul,

This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is "there are at most two threads involved". There should be other word choices. It's up to you which one to use.

Good catch, applied, thank you!

Thanx, Paul

Quoted 21 lines

Thanks, Akira
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 memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
memorder/memorder.tex +1 -1
index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure.
 Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in
 Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity}
 and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}.
-In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there
+In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there
 are at most two threads involved.
 
 \QuickQuiz{}
Signature · 1 line
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